oscar morales

Outside Myself

you know sometimes i wish i was someone else,
just one chance to get outside myself, take one
day to live someones life, maybe even be
someones wife, or maybe be a killer
holdin aknife a disguise, so no one can see
who i am, and for once i would have a
chance to win, im tired of losing, tired of
hiding, can someone understand what im writing?

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 28, 2009

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Comments about Outside Myself by oscar morales

  • Joshua Wickstrom (3/28/2009 7:59:00 PM)

    hmm, interesting poem...
    I like it very much.
    I am curious though, why do you wish to be someone else?
    As I see it, Oscare Morales is a poet and is unlike anyone else.
    why would you wish to change this?
    I think you should believe in yourself, and stop hiding my friend.
    your you, and you should take great pride in that.

    please keep writing..


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