Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 211,726 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Pain (Tanka) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Nerve impulses race
Agony seems immortal
Minutes become years
Wretched body might endure
Abject spirit surrenders

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Tanka

Comments about Pain (Tanka) by Kelly Kurt

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/11/2015 7:07:00 AM)

    Truly, characteristics of pain are well depicted (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/11/2015 10:10:00 AM)

    Thanks, Abdulrazak. It is easier to write about something when you are experiencing it. : -O

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  • (9/8/2015 7:49:00 PM)

    ......something I've always found interesting, is how deep pain can go...hope you feel better soon ★ (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/8/2015 11:10:00 PM)

    Thank you, SP. Me too.: -)

  • (9/8/2015 3:28:00 PM)

    We could feel your pain in this very descriptive piece.
    All your many fans wish you better health very soon.
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    Kelly Kurt (9/8/2015 5:42:00 PM)

    Thank you, Sandra. At least it inspired a poem.: -)

  • Valsa George (9/8/2015 12:37:00 AM)

    I can sense the severity of the pain..... nerve twitching and soul shattering! Great Tanka! (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/8/2015 11:03:00 AM)

    I have aggravated an old, serious neck injury. The pain is terrible and constant. This will hopefully pass but in the meantime, I am dispirited.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 7, 2015

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