Play Ends; Curtains Down Poem by Mubeen Sadhika
Play Ends; Curtains Down
The fiery dragon
in the tranquil
of the cool garden
friend of the beast
another monster flying
upside down menacing
mercurial blow of fire
emitting around....
..........................................................................stopping....the discharge
..........................................................................breathing....the smoke
..........................................................................loosing.......the feature
..........................................................................becoming....the weak...
That soft little angel
lying on the rose-petal bed
thinking about the creature
laughing at its overture
conditions that the barbaric
wild animal would undergo...
............................................................................inhaling......the flame
............................................................................coughing....the fume
............................................................................reducing....the element
............................................................................missing......the potent
Dragon's flight to overcome
the princess turning the master
now the venom to be lost
to accept the proposal
cleaving the root would
clear the poison
friend's humiliation striking
the spongy heart......
.............................................................................suffering.......the cut
.............................................................................distressing....the capital
.............................................................................crippling.......the control
.............................................................................settling..........the chore
The beauty queen on
cloud nine modestly
assuming the brute
to run away from
agony and would not
turn back.......
...............................................................................enduring.......hurt
...............................................................................pretending...unhurt
...............................................................................confining.....lame
...............................................................................remaining.....feeble
Dragon on the death-bed
smiling to the friend
proclaiming the failure
negation of the darling
to be reborn to surrender
the whole devotion
never parting without
the adored.......
Curtains down.....................am still reading and trying to fathom into this highly symbolical poem, , ,
the second part of the title only re-emphasies teh title, , , , , the endgame occurs.....
I am very much glad, first of all, the ammmmmazing format! ......> innovative! And praiseworthy, despite different way of presentation, beautifully uninterrupted throughout! The use of myth wonderful! Dialog within dialog….blooming branches….outstanding ability to create imageries…..all together a big WOW! A REMARKABLE PIECE! 10000000000000000+
Mubeen... many sighs..fiery dragon..friend/beast..soft little angel..flight.. humiliation..spongy heart.. crippling the control.. setting the chore...turnback..parting..Play ends; Curtains down..10/10...not praise enough. Beast of Burdens-Angels are a Mysterious Brood.
Very creative poem, with images that are both original and daring. Congratulations!
Unique play in a poem set out with rebounding metaphors original thoughts take a bow before the curtain comes down ++++10 regards
a wonderful theme in a purposefully different form....a cause and effect
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Good write..............................................10s