Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 194,042 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Second Chance (Senryu) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

We are imperfect
Should one mistake be fatal?
No recovery?

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Senryu

Comments about Second Chance (Senryu) by Kelly Kurt

  • Edmund Strolis (1/28/2016 10:49:00 AM)

    Okay as per usual I don't know a Senryu from a Subaru all I know is that I like it and as for second chances. I wish them for all that are deserving............but sometimes being worthy is not enough. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/28/2016 4:35:00 PM)

    Senryu is just a haiku, but not focused on nature.

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  • Valsa George (1/28/2016 12:17:00 AM)

    Some mistakes can be fatal..... but most of them deserve a second or even third chance! Perfect syllable count ! A beautiful Senryu! A 10 (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/28/2016 1:35:00 AM)

    Thank you, Valsa. (I changed the last word from redemption to recovery)

  • Pamela Sinicrope (1/27/2016 8:17:00 AM)

    I will forgive the last line of your Senryu. Good points here. I think that most mistakes should not be fatal and we should almost always give second chances. There are a few exceptions here though. (Report) Reply

    Pamela Sinicrope (1/27/2016 4:43:00 PM)

    Kelly... I assumed the miscounted was intentional as it fit the theme! :) . You should leave it.

    Kelly Kurt (1/27/2016 1:21:00 PM)

    I can't believe I miscount. I will fix it

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 27, 2016

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 27, 2016

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