Sayeed Abubakar

Gold Star - 18,835 Points (21 September 1972 / Jessore / Bangladesh)

Seeing The Happiness Of Souls

Poem by Sayeed Abubakar

Bodies die of getting envious, seeing the happiness
of souls; the souls seem to lead the flowery life
of fairies. Seeing it, bodies spread the sighs
of hell into their eyes, lips and faces.

Their two souls, as it were, becoming a butterfly,
fly in infinite pleasure with two colorful wings;
Love has given them the speed of light;
their two lives become full to the brim in faith.

How far Mexico is and how far Bengal!
Still their two souls flirt together
at one place every moment day and night;
they have built their palace
everywhere in air, in water and on soil.

Seeing the happiness of souls, their two bodies
get perplexed and cry for each other in two different countries.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Sonnet

Poet's Notes about The Poem

For Lorena Lopez Velazquez of Mexico

Comments about Seeing The Happiness Of Souls by Sayeed Abubakar

  • Ashik MahmudAshik Mahmud (11/4/2015 9:22:00 PM)

    Nice one, carry on. Good job man. Bless you.(Report)Reply

    Sayeed AbubakarSayeed Abubakar(11/7/2015 3:39:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot.

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  • Sallam YassinSallam Yassin (1/20/2015 2:21:00 AM)

    amazing in colors of love
    your poem of soul(Report)Reply

    Sayeed AbubakarSayeed Abubakar(1/20/2015 10:03:00 AM)

    Thanks, dear poet.

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  • * Sunprincess * (1/2/2015 8:36:00 PM)

    .........a beautiful poem...sometimes happiness is like the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow....(Report)Reply

    Sayeed AbubakarSayeed Abubakar(1/3/2015 8:24:00 AM)

    Thanks, dear friend.

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  • Hazel DurhamHazel Durham (12/30/2014 11:27:00 AM)

    Stunning write bursting with longing for your beloved in a far land, with beautiful imagery, seeing the happiness of souls you and your beloved cry with such longing for each other! !(Report)Reply

    Sayeed AbubakarSayeed Abubakar(12/30/2014 11:38:00 AM)

    Many many thanks, dear friend Hazel, for your heart-touching comment. I like it.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 29, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 29, 2015