M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,355 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu - 112 Bubble On Cheek - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Cool river water
today weary a ripple
bubble on her cheek

Topic(s) of this poem: love, love and friendship

Form: Senryu

Poet's Notes about The Poem

It is a combo of nature and human relation, Haiku as well as senryu.

Comments about Senryu - 112 Bubble On Cheek by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/6/2016 3:15:00 AM)

    The ripples of nature. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Nosheen Irfan (1/27/2016 4:14:00 AM)

    Wowww. that's lovely. Ripple...bubble on her cheek. Beauteous.10 (Report) Reply

  • (1/16/2016 8:48:00 AM)

    Superb haiku........10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 16, 2016

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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