M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,498 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu Series - 8 (The Wait) - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

at the setting sun
ships return to the harbor
she searches blue flag.

with every passing car
boy thinks of his birthday gift
long traffic jam.

spider spinning web
my thoughts are elevated
we both wait for fly.

Topic(s) of this poem: waiting

Form: Senryu


Comments about Senryu Series - 8 (The Wait) by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/23/2016 4:09:00 AM)


    Long traffic jam! Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/23/2015 11:38:00 AM)


    This is very beautiful series. I salute you man (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/2/2015 9:28:00 PM)


    Nice and heat touching. Thanksa for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 2, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016


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