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' Success Of Heart'

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Why the heart beats..? ,
Because
It tries to escape
From man, a sinner,
And would achieve one day;
That is the day..!
The man would be also
Relieved from sinful
Thoughts, And ends
Committing immoral,

And reaches ‘haven or hell’,
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Missy Crayton 14 January 2010

this is a truly amazing poem your very goood poet

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wild forest- E- 04 February 2010

i like it........ nice job. ~

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Sally Plumb Plumb 22 January 2010

A fortune teller? I wonder...

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Lynn Glover 19 January 2010

This is a well written poem with a good flow to it. A very good job. Your friend Lynn

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Sylvi Sylva 17 January 2010

very deep and philosophical, another good one from you

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Maran Venugopal 16 January 2010

very good keep it up

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