Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 194,042 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Sunday (Tanka) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Week’s start, weekend’s end
What a duplicitous day
A promise of rest
But only if chores are done
And Monday is looming large

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Tanka

Comments about Sunday (Tanka) by Kelly Kurt

  • Akhtar Jawad (9/16/2015 5:13:00 AM)

    Saturday a night that is not followed by a working day. I love the Saturn instead of the Sun. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/16/2015 11:36:00 AM)

    Some people love Mondays. I am not one.: -)
    Thanks, Akhtar

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  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (9/14/2015 11:00:00 PM)

    Sunday lives in fear of Monday. How can it be a holiday? Your Tanks prises a fallacy to drive home the truth. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/15/2015)

    That's one of the fun things about working with this form.

  • David Wood (9/14/2015 3:26:00 PM)

    Retirement is the best job I've had. It took me nearly 50 years to get it but every day is a Sunday. The thing I don't like about chores is washing up and changing the bed. You do it once and six months later you have to do it again! (sorry for British sense of humour) . Lovely Tanka (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/14/2015 6:10:00 PM)

    Somehow, even being unemployed, Sunday takes on a feel of its own. Twice a year? You are ambitious! : -)

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/14/2015 2:39:00 PM)

    Well envisioned. Marvellous one. Thanks for sharing. ....10 (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/14/2015 6:11:00 PM)

    Thanks. I wrote it on Sunday after doing yard work

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/14/2015 12:57:00 PM)

    Very well thought Tanka..............Monday a busy day after so called rest day (Only from office, but a busy day at home) ........10++++ (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/14/2015 1:02:00 PM)

    Thanks, Mohammed. I am still sore from all the yard work I did yesterday. : -)

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 14, 2015

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