Dave Alan Walker

Gold Star - 4,817 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

The Beast 3 - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Storms of violence
Storms of lies
Storms of a family
with no friends
Just a street full of lies
with dead and decaying lives

They should have stopped
what they did know
because at the end of the day
they knew it was wrong
Life in prison
should give them time...

Time to think about
all the wrongs they did do
Because they won't ever
be going home again
The beast is gone


Poet's Notes about The Poem

The Beast 1,2 and 3 are true.
The only thing that is not true is, they have
not got life in prison yet. But it is coming.
There is a lot of people in prison for things
they did not do, so why should these people
Get away with what they did do.
Only one of the family did the crimes but
the rest of them knew and never stopped him
or did anything to stop him. Justice needs to get
the innocent free and the guilty away.

Comments about The Beast 3 by Dave Alan Walker

  • Sharad Juneja (4/20/2012 6:21:00 AM)


    I really liked the way u think... i respect u for the sam e... beautiful piece of writing Dave (Report) Reply

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  • (4/16/2012 10:28:00 AM)


    The subject that you discussed here is huge and the criminals should be punished, in certain cases, the innocents are punished for selfish reasons such as fear of losing the position in the governments, political reasons and others.. Cry for justice. Well written (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 16, 2012



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