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The Hair

Rating: 5.0

I watch it fall to the ground.
It bends
and twists.
Lighter than a feather.
It has no soul.
I have no soul...

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Sicelo Sithole 20 March 2009

You are a fine observer, a very good poem...not that it is just carefull observation but because it also includes some very original thinking in it and the last line surfaces all the motive behind this beautiful poem. well done.10+++ regards, sicelo

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