Broken Hearts

Tonight

Tonight
Was deeper then before
There was
More and more
No way for the blood…
To stop
Now it is…
Upon the floor
I can barely breathe
I feel set free
At ease
The blood…
Drips of my wrist
On to the floor
More and more
If I die tonight
No one will care
No one
Will even cry
I won’t be missed
All I will be is a…
Far off memory
In the back of your mind
I will never be thought of
No one cares about me
I don’t matter
I am going to…
Cut deeper
I am going to…
Die
Tonight

Poem Submitted: Friday, February 27, 2009

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  • Brenna Franklin (1/13/2016 2:17:00 PM)

    Brilliantly written, but it just goes downhill. You should encourage people to not kill themselves, it feels like you are egging them on. I do not mean to be rude but I like to express my feelings on certain things.

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  • Sierra Mick (4/17/2012 9:46:00 PM)

    OMG! ! ! ! OMG! ! ! ! Bravo! ! ! ! I love your poem. they are so what i think. All your poem are exactly what i think. Omg i cant explain how much these poem mean to me

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