M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,355 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Untouched Love - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Her body is a melting pot
On the silken sheet
with pillow beneath
trying hard to hold spinning head
temperature falling
heartbeat rising
body heat ignites the fumes
smell of love
in the air and everywhere
hairs like desert of vast eternity
with dunes of desires
despair was meager to obliterate
yearning to slurp those juicy lips
yet he dare not to ignite mutual flames.

Topic(s) of this poem: love, sensual

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Untouched Love by M. Asim Nehal

  • (5/28/2016 6:00:00 AM)


    Absolutely fantastic write Asim 10 (Report) Reply

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  • (11/15/2015 11:23:00 AM)


    Sensual poem, great enjoyment in reading it. (Report) Reply

  • (11/15/2015 10:52:00 AM)


    Very crafty poem, it ignites flavour to touch....Thanks Asimji. (Report) Reply

  • (11/15/2015 8:32:00 AM)


    almost real but I'm too old to feel
    beautiful poem Asim
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  • Ari Alsio (11/15/2015 7:28:00 AM)


    When this poem who reads, he'll be really happy, thank you and 10+! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 15, 2015



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