Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 205,818 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Valley (Haiku) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Matured among hills
Peaceful at its altitude
Indebted to time

Topic(s) of this poem: life, perspective, time

Form: Haiku

Comments about Valley (Haiku) by Kelly Kurt

  • Melvina Germain (11/8/2015 6:59:00 AM)

    Sitting and enjoying the surrounding in the valley of peace, I see this person staring with a slight smile etched upon the face...Fabulous imagery in this Haiku..... (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/8/2015 3:28:00 PM)

    Thanks, Melvina. For maturing into our fuller selves, we are all indebted to time

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  • Akhtar Jawad (9/28/2015 1:35:00 AM)

    A valley wherever may be what ever may be the altitude is always beautiful and so is the Haiku written on it. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/28/2015 11:08:00 AM)

    Thank you, Akhtar. beautiful and peaceful

  • (9/26/2015 9:02:00 AM)

    This is amazing...Yes, I can read this and think of a valley. And there's the extended metaphor....the lone individual, at peace, and his/her surroundings....just amazing. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/26/2015 10:55:00 AM)

    Thank you. That is the wonderful thing about Haiku and why I enjoy writing them.

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/22/2015 1:55:00 PM)

    Peaceful at its altitude.... of course altitude of valley is so high and peaceful. So nicely envisioned and presented dear Kelly, thanks for sharing. .....10 (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/22/2015 7:13:00 PM)

    The valley is at peace with its place in the hills and thankful to time for carving it out

  • Liza Sudina (9/22/2015 1:46:00 PM)

    this poem lifted me up to the mountains and even changed my breath to more deep! thank you! (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/22/2015 7:11:00 PM)

    Thank you, Liza. I saw a photo of a beautiful valley in Kashmir and was inspired to write on its behalf.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 22, 2015

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