Your Kiss Poem by Marieta Maglas

Your Kiss

Rating: 5.0

The kiss of your lips,
Is slipping on my sad breast
To reach my deeply dormant eyelash.....

Your devoted tranquility is so pure,
And your soul is so beautiful...

We are together while lying in the sunshine....

Lost memories

Come back again
Into my mind
With their meaning.

Tell me that the world is the same
And nothing has changed,

Though we are aware that
We are so different,
And our touch is
Impossible to be achieved.

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Jennifer Kaleigh 16 November 2009

I think your poems are the poetic image and full of limpid words. 10

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Edward Parsley 16 November 2009

Beauty - it captures the state of mind so well! ....10

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Jimmy Reed 16 November 2009

lots of images lots of meaning.....great piece 10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 30 October 2009

could reach my deeply dormant eyelash I would have slipped my mind to dream................... oh what kind of imagery blazing the glory of love winter world may feel fire roaring deep by sweet warmth, excellent exposition of mirth by the thrills of romance trembling over blushed lips, thirst slowly seeps the blue, ingenoius write by imagery,10+++, thanks for vsharing

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 September 2009

ammmmmmazing wording dear mari! REFLECTIVE! THE END COMPELLED ME TO THINK LOT! excellent! 10+

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 04 August 2010

From Platonic Plane ~ ‘And our touch is impossible to be achieved.’ ~ Why not ride on colorful wings of emotion/imagination…enjoy the Magic of smooch…loluuud….finely chiseled… Thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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nomad omnia 28 November 2009

Dream-like. Too good to wake up from: -) N

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Eyan Desir 21 November 2009

this is a sexy poem good job...

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Adrianne Colton 20 November 2009

This is a beautiful piece of work 10

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Agnes Parker 16 November 2009

Poignant, so touching to read 10

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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