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Your Laughter

Rating: 5.0

Your laughter blew into my life
With swift surprise.
It spun happily around me,
Whirling with dizzy speed.
Its breeze licked and kissed
At my ears.
Entering quickly,
It found places in my mind,
My heart, my soul.
It raced in,

Filling me with a whirlwind
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Appreciation for the laughter of a man, that can bring such joy.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 22 July 2013

Its breeze licked and kissed At my ears. Entering quickly, It found places in my mind, My heart, my soul. beautiful write.love your write

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 25 June 2013

Wonderful poem Sandi, well penned. Siya_! !

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Ruth Walters 22 June 2013

another little gem here

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 20 June 2013

a happy thought, beautifully done.

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Sj Holland 23 July 2013

@Ramesh Rai Thank you. That's my fav stanza too!

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Kelly Kurt 05 April 2015

A beautiful poem, Sandi. Oh, to have that glorious feeling. Thanks for sharing

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Sj Holland 16 October 2013

Khairul, thanks for reading. I'll read your poem :)

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Khairul Ahsan 16 October 2013

'It found places in my mind, My heart, my soul. It raced in, Filling me with a whirlwind Of joyous anticipation.' A perfect description of an amorous connection. Please vote for my poem 'Pristine Love' for the ongoing poetry contest. Here is the link: http: //www.poemhunter.com/contest-vote/pristine-love/

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Sj Holland 15 August 2013

@Ruth Walters Thanks for visiting. You've given an accurate and exciting evaluation. Too bad that some of the best romance poetry is based on idealistic and unrealistic fixations. Thank God that those feelings can certainly be had, later in life, in mature, long-lasting relationships, lol.

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Ruth Walters 15 August 2013

This sounds like love, the first exciting moments when you know you've connected and you're filled with that special, uplifting buoyancy that carries you along on cloud nine :)

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