A Baby's View Of Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

A Baby's View Of

Rating: 4.2

I came as tomorrow
Swaddled in unawareness
To your warm womb
Without your choice
Or mine
Destined to up date
With time
Our human tree
But before love
Grew into flesh and words
What is unfinished creation-
A precipitation of blood
Became my transcendence.

Lasoaphia Quxazs 24 October 2012

However, only the parents can decide if they want to have that baby or not, and not an old man, old woman or a growing boy who is standing on the street where I pass and have the sign against the abortion.

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Souren Mondal 23 February 2016

I agree with you..

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Sally Plumb Plumb 15 November 2012

Very moving piece of work.

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Zeenat Fatima 21 November 2012

touchy poem.. Beautifully explained the baby's story..

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Auwal Abdullahi 31 August 2012

I am afraid it could be Shakespeare himself writing here. Great poem.

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Hiroshi Satow 27 April 2021

Really, babies come as tomorrow. What a good and witty expression of newborn babies. I love it.

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Anvesha Agrawal 09 January 2021

So beautifully written for baby, s explained about what they fell in their mother, s womb

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MARTIN GREYFORD 26 September 2020

Absolutely profound and prolific writing 10

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Anjandev Roy 07 July 2020

This is absolutely superb......thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

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Varsha M 08 June 2020

Beautifully written from a baby's point of view. What he feels inside the womb. What is unfinished creation- a precipitation of blood became my transcendence. Before love grew.. very sad truth but this is very true. Appreciations.

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