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A Baby's View Of

Rating: 4.2
I came as tomorrow
Swaddled in unawareness
To your warm womb
Mother……
Without your choice
Or mine
Destined to up date
With time
Our human tree
But before love
Grew into flesh and words
What is unfinished creation-
A precipitation of blood
Became my transcendence.
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Anvesha Agrawal 09 January 2021
So beautifully written for baby, s explained about what they fell in their mother, s womb
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MARTIN GREYFORD 26 September 2020
Absolutely profound and prolific writing 10
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Anjandev Roy 07 July 2020
This is absolutely superb......thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.
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Varsha M 08 June 2020
Beautifully written from a baby's point of view. What he feels inside the womb. What is unfinished creation- a precipitation of blood became my transcendence. Before love grew.. very sad truth but this is very true. Appreciations.
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A. Madhavan 15 May 2020
Many years ago, I imagined an unborn baby as a possible fellow-creature in this unfinished earth, this 'janma', as we figure it.
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Magadha Rani 15 February 2020
I came as tomorrow Swaddled in unawareness To your warm womb Mother……Great expression! A great poem dear poet.........10++++++
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Kesav Easwaran 25 January 2020
Great dedication to motherhood. Sweet poem.10+
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Anjandev Roy 05 January 2020
Profound write. Fine to read. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 04 January 2020
Dear Poet Yoonoos, This is a fabulous poem. Yes, we do come into this world without a choice totally unaware. We leave this world also without a hint of its time. Yet, we strive and make effort to live a life while it lasts. Wishing you a wonderful year of joy and peace........10
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Ms Doubtfire 29 December 2019
Loved it, what would we be without our mothers?
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