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A Journey-The River

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The Beginning
‘Midst a howling wind, raging through mountains high
Clad in blinding snow, viewed by a grumpy sky
Snowdrifts patiently waited for the sun to call
To begin a journey that would bring life to all

The Stream
Tiny droplets stealthy weaved, through unfreezing snow
Touching each other, then continued in a flow
Struggling streamlets combined, guided by natures' force
The strengthen stream flowed free, but yet fed by its source
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A Journey-The River
Monday, February 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
Dr Dillip K Swain 19 April 2018
This is wonderful write dear poet! You have beautifully composed the poem taking different facets of river! A complete cycle of the journey of a river from the beginning to the return is immaculately depicted in this amazing piece of work! Liked it so much dear poet...10
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Loke Kok Yee 20 April 2018
Thank you Dr for reading and commenting.
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 06 February 2018
The journey of river - so beautifully penned. The evolution from a stream to river so eloquently narrated. A wonderful poem that i enjoyed a lot.
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Loke Kok Yee 07 February 2018
Thank you Geeta, this one was done in a hurry and I glad you liked it.
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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 February 2018
Such a fine poem, Loke??
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Loke Kok Yee 07 February 2018
Thank you very much Bernard, so kind of you to visit.
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