A Lonely Cloud.....[nature Observation; Humor] Poem by Bri Edwards
A Lonely Cloud.....[nature Observation; Humor]
I saw a lonely cloud one day.
It looked small beyond the Bay.
I tried to find a second and failed,
even though I looked each way.
Think of it! A single cloud.
Its loneliness spoke to me aloud.
I wonder how it felt up there.
Was it very proud?
A rarity I think it was;
like an active bee with no buzz;
like a single potato chip;
like a peach skin with no fuzz.
Like one firefighter at a fire;
a solitary pigeon on a wire;
a Facebook member with no 'friend';
a single member in a choir.
It's like an Easter basket with one egg;
a basketball star with one leg;
me with just one word to say;
a fraternity party with just one keg.
I guess you've come to realize by now
that when I saw that cloud I thought 'Wow! '.
If I'd been Adam, with Eve at my side,
to that small distant cloud I might bow.
(August 2012)
I'm growing through the peom again, and am lost in this poem, and all I can say again is; Wow! Kingfemi
Another very inspirational poem, so many subjects around us...but we don't all see the same things..nice.
All I can say is Wow! Lovely poem, I feel like huging d poem! lol.great work! Kingfemi
I'm growing through the peom again, and am lost in this poem, and all I can say again is; Wow! Kingfemi
I just made this one of my favorites on PH. So THERE! ;) BRI Enjoy.
Let me quote from this amazing poem-Think of it! A single cloud. Its loneliness spoke to me aloud. I wonder how it felt up there. Was it very proud?
Feeling lonely is painful, no matter how big one may be! Enjoying the silence is one thing, but being without a companion is a different matter.
It is such a beautiful poem Bri.I have read it in one of your Showcase.Perhaps mentioned it in my comment.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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6/25/2022 11:52:42 PM # 1.0.0.988
A very unique poem on a unique phenomenon! A sky with just a speck of cloud... and such umpteen comparisons! Choosing the out of the ordinary themes and presenting them in a striking manner is something that makes your poems nonpareil! ! Greatly enjoyed! !