Weeping Willow

Another Place

Another place passing
God only knows all you've
been through
Another step in a direction
where songs are sung
out of tune

Life has a dance, a move
You must get into the flow
Waltzing in the winds of musical tunes
Dancing to the harmony of life
Catching the tune that lingers
in the air

The flutters of small little birds
where nature cares

Life has a dance
Sometimes its slow
as it flows through my heart
Waltzing through to touch my soul

My voice has gone silent, amiss the many
things of life

Thoughts run through me in a tranquil state
Often images paint pictures across my mind
Words jumble in a mixture of silence
Struggling to find peace
in another place
Next to the sea
Where winds blow free

The sea sparkles in the sun
as my mind see's images to free
my soul
Peace is all I feel
Seagulls fly high in the blue sky

I am free with no more words to speak
I rest InsideGod's grace
As I breathe
I am free within this new place.


Topic(s) of this poem: peaceful

Poem Submitted: Monday, September 7, 2020
Poem Edited: Monday, September 7, 2020

Form: Free Verse

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Comments about Another Place by Weeping Willow

  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (9/8/2020 12:41:00 AM)

    A well authored composition.
    Truly superior....10++++++

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  • Varsha MVarsha M (9/7/2020 7:52:00 PM)

    The creativity of expression flow like a river washing away that was drenched in furt and carrying you further as you sail in its eternity enjoying the beauty that tranquility wished to steal. Another place is freeing indeed giving me another chance another life. Beautiful words.

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  • Weeping WillowWeeping Willow (9/7/2020 6:15:00 PM)

    So annoyed every time a word is misspelled and you correct it, the poem still remains the same. What's up with Poemhunter anyways. This is why I don't post that many poems here.

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