Apologize Poem by LaRon Green Sr.

Apologize

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I apologize for the wrong
I've done
deep within
the sentimental of my love
for you
There isn't no price
that can cover my expensive
but my love and care for you
Money(gifts) is the rule of all evil
that flow
before the eyes
with love and affection
it carress your
mind, body and soul
that come from within
it's no surprise
Love is everything
that have no meaning
but mean alot
that which purpose
is to heal
one's soul for enjoyment
happiness and satisfaction
with no recepit
I apologize for the hurt
you have inside
my gratitude
is to treat you
for the woman
you are
No lies, cheat or deceit
You are a one woman man
that deserve wreath
it all
I am yours to keep
The Queen of my castle
The King of your Throne
we need to keep
our love going on
I apologize
what else can I say
I am yours
I am willing to stay(work it out)
I apologize

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Londiwe Buthelezi 25 March 2009

It takes alot of courage to apologize and i ammend you for doing it so publically

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she had to take you back. if she didn't.. she has no heart.

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Ency Bearis 05 April 2009

this a very nice write..deep from your heart..to who ever this verses aimed to..I am sure this will touch the person's heart...lovely...10

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Silent Speaker 06 April 2009

I really like this, its so personal. great job :)

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Scott Daniels 07 April 2009

The more of your work I read, the more I like it. Well done sir. May I suggest expanding your vocabulary and grammar

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Hans Vr 25 February 2012

Only great men do apologize. It is a true sign of greatness if we can look deep inside and try to see where we went wrong. Sometimes it is obvious but if we do reflect on everyday, also the ones where apparently nothing went wrong, we will become a little bit stronger every day. I really love reflection, the taking of a little bit of time to think, just to think about ourselves, how did we do, did we make a great day for us and for others? how would we rate our day on a scale of 1 to 10 and what can we do to make tomorrow a ten?

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Farah Ilyas 04 February 2012

GUD WAY TO APOLOGISE LOL....LIKE IT

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Tracey Wynn 06 June 2009

very nice poem, i like it

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Indira Renganathan 21 April 2009

A real touching apology well penned...nice write

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Ency Bearis 09 April 2009

a sincere offer of apology deep from the soul..nicely presented and written..

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