Clean Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Clean

Rating: 4.7


River water
washes
everything
clean

time
flow
glow
minds

river water
washes
itself
clean.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jim McGill 26 January 2023

Yes. True. A river does wash its self clean. So does truth in life.

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Thank you. It is gratifying that you could connect with the poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 January 2023

Top Score and to My Favourites

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 January 2023

FINALLY I have found this poem as you suggested through BECCA's response upon your CLEAN, Unnikrishnan

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Thank you, Sylvia for your patience. Thank God, you could find a way out of the mess PoemHunter has created.

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Nosheen Irfan 22 January 2023

Depth lies in simplicity and brevity.... your poem proves that. A deep underlying meaning behind the economy of words. Bravo!

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Thank you. I hold brevity as one of the most important qualities of Poetry. Though, I am not very adept in maintaining brevity in my poems. Thank you, Nosheen

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Bri Edwards 16 January 2023

Of course some may feel some of my poems are horrid, with which OF COURSE I would disagree! ! ! Ha ha ha. bri

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If you feel so, Bri, you could be right! Hahaha

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Hahaha!

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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