emma hannon

Rookie (28-3-1995 / sligo)

He Will Never Know - Poem by emma hannon

He does not know how i feel about him and the way he makes me feel. Everytime i think of him i get nervous, when i see him i feel sick and when i talk to him, it feels like its just us.

Some may call it love, some may call it sickness, but i have no idea what it is. When i try to investigate i find nothing, it's like looking at a white blank sheet of paper. I hope that someday that i will find out what it is.

But i have no idea how he feels, does he hate, like, love or cannot stand me, but if we become friends, i will be happy, but extremely depressed if we become enemies, but if he goes out with someone else, i shall not be sad, as he would be happy, and thats all i want.

Comments about He Will Never Know by emma hannon

  • (12/26/2009 9:58:00 AM)

    This is great! ! You did such a great job expressing how you feel about HIM! ! ! It's great! ! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

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  • David Czar Socrates Freeman (12/24/2009 8:36:00 AM)

    YOU did a good job on this girl. And on a different note i have never seen anything like this. keep it up. Merry Christmas (Report) Reply

  • (12/22/2009 10:27:00 PM)

    hmm, I like this poem because I can really relate to it and I think others can easily relate also. I also like how its pretty straight forward but you can still feel the emotion behind it (Report) Reply

  • (12/22/2009 7:30:00 PM)

    A budding romance huh. Fuck it just tell him kid, if not you'll regret it, trust me! By the way a nice emotional piece, good work (perhaps you should show him this) .

    Slán leat,
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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (12/22/2009 9:16:00 AM)

    It seems like beginning of love, Emma, and you have very well expressed your feelings at this phase of life. Best Wishes. (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2009 3:36:00 PM)

    Hi emma, it's my delight to read your lovely work, this poem grabbed my heart and didn't let go until the end.One of the greatest poets, our friend John Knight, said that he would send you a message about the structure of your heartfelt verses in ' He Will never Know'.Again, you have a gift for writing your work shows clarity, simplicity, and directness. You maintained the core of your story/poem, straightforwardly, unttl the last line. a 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • John Knight (12/21/2009 3:01:00 PM)

    Hi Emma - I like the content of this poem ecause it describes the angst of love we all go though (male & female) in our adolescence. 'He/She does not know how I feel about him/her'. There is a marvelous sentiment in Verse Two - 'Some may call it love........ I have no idea what it is'. All of us who are over 21 wish we could discover that innocence again - AWESOME. The ending is so so generous if only all teenagers felt that way. 'If he goes out with someone else - I shall not be sad - as he would be happy - and that is all I want' - BEAUTIFUL. I love this poem Emma it is so so lovely. I have sent you a message suggesting a better structure for the poem - which would give it more FLOW and RECITABILITY. Well done it deserves a TEN. Love you in Poetry - JOHN. (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2009 12:18:00 PM)

    Love is the bullet. Whether you are the giver or the taker you will come off scarred. A true poem about love. I wrote a 2 part poem about love, too, but it can't compare to this.10/10! (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2009 11:57:00 AM)

    I must say that the raw emotion with which you present your poems is beautiful. I can completely identify with the scenario you present, and the way in which you present it. This verse flows in the natural manner of thought, broken apart in their own natural stanzas. However, a rigidity or rhythm would add maturity to your work. (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (12/20/2009 3:34:00 PM)

    Emma, you got the feelings and the emotion, the way you express yourself, I call it love...Please. read one of my poems titled 'LOVE' and you will see what I mean, keep it up, read, read, and read and you will come a long way...10++++ (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2009 12:57:00 PM)

    That last line. It's so mature and it's just so kind. I wish I could come to that. (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2009 9:55:00 AM)

    this is love dear

    Go ahead and tell him
    Gooooooooood poem
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  • (12/19/2009 3:23:00 PM)

    this is really good. But it's not just girls that feel this way guys feel this a lot. Most of the time we are nervous that the girl will shut us down and look like an idiot. Great job (Report) Reply

  • (12/19/2009 2:37:00 PM)

    This is very cute,
    and intelectual on ones self
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  • Is It Poetry James Mclain (12/19/2009 2:05:00 PM)

    just softly whisper...
    with his ear..
    cupped in both..
    your hands..iip
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  • (12/18/2009 3:27:00 PM)

    :) .. ask him.. :) .. if he likes you.. or tell him.. that you do.. (Report) Reply

  • (12/18/2009 2:23:00 PM)

    Arrrrr the pirate of love knows what it is, it's a cruise into the sea of love. (Report) Reply

  • (12/18/2009 2:23:00 PM)

    aww how sweet is that (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 18, 2009

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