poet Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Let's Make Love Tonight

Let's make love tonight
Until our bodies will transcend their shapes
To become one single corpse.
Let's make this love to be tonight
Our eternal emotion of dreams
And not just a fleeting dream.
And if we accomplish
Our abyss inside,
We will be like two butterflies
Released from their cocoons
And we will awake
In our novel world of seconds,
Were we will subsist for being eternal..

Poem Submitted: Monday, July 6, 2009
Poem Edited: Monday, July 4, 2011

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  • Castellenas JohnCastellenas John (4/4/2019 1:52:00 PM)

    A amazing poem. You made the reader believe every word. Thank you Marieta for sharing the amazing poetry.

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  • Fog RunnerFog Runner (2/15/2016 6:32:00 PM)

    Your poem's title is as nude as rainwater, and the lines that follow offer evidence that your conceptual expectations are bursting with transformative fertility.

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  • E.j. LangleyE.j. Langley (12/6/2015 1:02:00 PM)

    I like this poem, it has a dark undertone that I can appreciate. To become one single corpse is a great line and image.

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  • Whisperkwane Lamb (2/11/2010 3:05:00 PM)

    love making so free so full of all that one is...passion...blowing forward...sideways...up..down..stop! ...is not a command...hands move about...knowning not where...what a dare...how care-free is that...you have woke in me...my dreams...dreamt.

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  • John KnightJohn Knight (12/29/2009 5:16:00 AM)

    Hi Mari - This is beautiful - so gentle and yet so emotive - this is how cerebral (dream) love really works. 'One eternal emotion of dream' a beautiful 'coming together' of lovers - separated by distance but locked together in passion.. Thank you for sharing your thoughts in such an elegant way. It scores a MAX with me! Love you in poetry - JOHN X

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet SimonHoward The Motivational Poet Simon (12/2/2009 10:08:00 AM)

    So much passion in so few words... Wow....

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (11/29/2009 12:07:00 PM)

    ‘…were we will subsist for being eternal..’

    Splendid ‘touch-down’ in the fathomless chasm of entirety and eternity…
    Ten
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

    Cordially invite to my page with your graceful comments and criticism too welcomed…
    [Why hack my she &c]
    niv

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  • moribund love (11/4/2009 11:14:00 AM)

    what happens while the act! nicely penned! 10

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  • Mamta Agarwal (11/4/2009 3:14:00 AM)

    you have captured love in all its dimensions- from physical, sexual, erotic, transcending above all this to spiritual and a feeling of bliss and growth.

    a very lovely depiction, vivid and enchanting

    Mamta

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (11/3/2009 3:20:00 PM)

    From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;)
    To: Marieta Maglas
    Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Re: forever yours


    hello Marietta.
    I promise i will get deeper in your work.
    I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts.

    kind regards

    stuiterdick

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  • Margaret Donaghy (10/30/2009 1:39:00 PM)

    I procrastinate such harsh realities

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  • Mark Wahlberg (10/28/2009 9:28:00 AM)

    Corpse indeed is the word that fully captures the sempiternal divinity of lovemaking encapsulate rather than the manifest temporal indulgence…
    10

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  • Beatriz Hutton (10/25/2009 12:36:00 PM)

    lovely poem cant belive how well u chose the words to agree with the passion of love
    10

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  • Sathyanarayana M V SSathyanarayana M V S (10/22/2009 10:09:00 PM)

    The inner philosophy of 'coitus' so well penned, so true.

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (10/20/2009 2:38:00 PM)

    From: Dona Lil Antonio (Manila Philippines; Female; 29)
    To: Marieta Maglas
    Date Time: 10/19/2009 12: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: hi


    ive gone through your poems they were all awesome and written in deep feelings.
    keep writing and keep inspiring others to make good crafts as well.

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (10/18/2009 10:24:00 AM)

    From: Alan Draper (Braunton, Devon United Kingdom; Male; 54)
    To: Marieta Maglas
    Date Time: 10/18/2009 9: 17: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Thanks Mari


    I've read your poems. You have good imagination but the poems are too serious for me. Maybe thats the way in Romania. It does have a sad reputation to us Westerners. I love laughing and challenge you to write a funny poem to make me happy. Lots of luck from your Froggie friend Alan

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  • Roy Martinez (10/16/2009 12:19:00 PM)

    a feeling of romance and love................10

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  • Agnes Parker (10/2/2009 7:37:00 AM)

    I have yet to experience this. Very good poem.................

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  • Abigail Roscoe (9/30/2009 1:36:00 PM)

    ...Excellent thought process....................

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  • Manuel OdenyManuel Odeny (9/30/2009 6:17:00 AM)

    Congrats. The romance of love making beautifully captured.
    10+++++++++++++

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