No Way Poem by LaRon Green Sr.

No Way

Rating: 4.9


I am tired of the mess
I am better then
all the rest
why keep putting me
through the test
we both deserve the best
I thought things was going
to be different
but it is the same misery
that love company
I just need you summary
that lead to your honey
I don't want your money
I need your love, support, care
and harmony
I don't need the trouble
from others
that keep our love
from be so loving and cuddle
it's sad they want go their way
keeping our loving
in dismay
because they are sad
and looking for a prey
from their bad shoo-ray
I wish they let us go on
our way
it's no way
if you don't let them know
were we stay(in our relationship)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 05 April 2009

Always will be a road, And, not only one, You can even, have closed Your eyes, than those... Do you want, or don't want... The way will stay, -wont You on road, itself... Believe, but not to me...- Fate- fortune necessarily To you will by helps... .................................. Tsira

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Her Name Is Taylor 03 April 2009

emotional....deep...goood....10!

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Miriam Maia Padua 03 April 2009

very nice write... expressing emotions sincere feelings... each lines express through feelings very convincing write 10+++

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Aarif Ameen 01 April 2009

its very nice work i liked it good luck i love these lines I am tired of the mess I am better then all the rest

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A great piece that can express whats between the lines. Another great write! <3Payyton

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