Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 210,665 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

October Drizzle - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Sullen skies weep with futility
Gelid droplets vainly attempt to revive
Dripping eaves reckon the volume with assonance
Cold, cold water
Emissary of life
Little but dampens this day

Topic(s) of this poem: life, nature, october

Comments about October Drizzle by Kelly Kurt

  • Seema Jayaraman (11/3/2015 5:54:00 AM)

    Gelid Droplets, assonance.. awesome descriptions of a sullen October rainy weather. thanks. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/3/2015 9:26:00 PM)

    Thank you. Today was a sunny, November day.: -)

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  • Valsa George (10/28/2015 11:46:00 PM)

    Yes, Water is the emissary of life! Enjoyed the cooling drizzle all over! (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (10/29/2015 12:09:00 AM)

    Thank you. Cold water fell again today

  • Melvina Germain (10/28/2015 9:28:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem Kelly, enjoyed tremendously..... (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (10/29/2015 12:10:00 AM)

    Thanks, Melvina. It has been a beautifully depressing week so far: -)

  • Pamela Sinicrope (10/28/2015 9:39:00 AM)

    Same here. Enough said. Except I loved the line, 'Gelid droplets vainly attempt to revive, ' as I had a similar thought, while staring at my herb garden. Despite the rain, its just too cold for new leaves to propagage or for the dying plants to lift up. The sky is grey and barren. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (10/28/2015 12:45:00 PM)

    The angle of the sun and shortness of daylight cannot be compensated for by rain. I have few flowers left and my basil is dead too

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/28/2015 9:25:00 AM)

    Wow, what a coincidence yesterday I went to my farms in India and on my way, all of a sudden, thick dark clouds gathered within few minutes and with thunder and lightening, drizzle started, when I started from home around 12.30 pm it was bright sunny day with no precast weather for rains..... Nice poem, Sir..With global warming October has become unpredictable.......... Warm days, cold nights and in between rains anytime. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (10/28/2015 12:42:00 PM)

    The latitude where I live can have weather changes very abruptly. Soon I will be writing of polar winds and 30 below temperatures

  • Saheb Mohapatra (10/28/2015 8:37:00 AM)

    excellent use of words..........this is what we call a know..... all your words are touching my heart directly.............great work. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (10/28/2015 12:40:00 PM)

    Thank you, Saheb. That is very kind and brings me a smile

  • (10/28/2015 2:04:00 AM)

    looks like it is not getting better
    lots of coffee and write more poetry-10
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    Kelly Kurt (10/28/2015 12:38:00 PM)

    Chilly and drizzle today. Drinking coffee and writing.: -)

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 28, 2015

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