Louise McVicar

Rookie (22-05-1987 / Perth, Australia)

Relinquish Becomming - Poem by Louise McVicar

Crechendo, spiral, dripping, cast
away emotions, unawares.
Fling their essence to the wind and stand to
watch their scattering.
Control my mind, subdue my flesh
Deliver myself from consequence.
Empty my sould upon the floor and quickly
sweep the contents out the door.

Let no one see, let no one breathe
upon this scene let no one live
for none must know this hyperbole
this secret ever more shall be.


Comments about Relinquish Becomming by Louise McVicar

  • (1/12/2006 6:47:00 AM)


    Great work.A real old style poem
    always goes down well.
    All the best
    Ian
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 7, 2006



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