Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 206,331 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

S.A.D. (Limerick) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

If the sun doesn’t show real soon
I’m afraid I’ll become quite the loon
It’s been gloomy and cold
And if the truth be told
I’d settle for the light of the moon

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Limerick

Comments about S.A.D. (Limerick) by Kelly Kurt

  • (12/2/2015 4:41:00 PM)

    There isn't much light around today,
    Everything seems murky and gray,
    Maybe the lack of truth.
    Makes the moonlight seem real good.

    It's not a happy world, so unjust, so many stories told.
    But don't be S.A.D.,
    At least we're not out I n the cold.

    Good write,
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    Kelly Kurt (12/2/2015 5:33:00 PM)

    Thanks, Sandra. Maybe some sun tomorrow. : -)

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  • Souren Mondal (12/1/2015 11:45:00 PM)

    A nice limmerick Kelly. Thanks for sharing.. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (12/2/2015 2:32:00 PM)

    Still no sun today! I'm losing it : -)

  • Pamela Sinicrope (12/1/2015 9:24:00 PM)

    Yes, Seasonal Affective Disorder is on the horizon...Its time to get out my 'happy lamp' from Costco! Nice Limerick Kelly!

    If the sun doesn’t shine on my face
    I’m afraid I'll lose all of my grace
    It’s been icky and icy
    Weather's been oh so dicey
    Wanna dance in my leather and lace!

    So....I tried. I read up on how to write a limerick and its supposed to be a little bawdy or slightly vulgur...
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    Pamela Sinicrope (12/2/2015 6:53:00 AM)

    No Rules! ;) . Glad you brought out the light of the moon!

    Kelly Kurt (12/1/2015 11:27:00 PM)

    I put on all my leather and lace
    What resulted wasn't really grace
    The sun didn't come out
    Glad no one was about
    Because the moon came out in its place

    There are no rules in my book : -)
    Thanks, Pam

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 1, 2015

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