Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 194,042 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Troubles (Senryu) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Boulders in rivers
Erode into smooth pebbles
Flow is unbroken

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Senryu

Comments about Troubles (Senryu) by Kelly Kurt

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (11/5/2015 9:03:00 AM)

    This is just great. What I once thought were troubles are now smooth pebbles down the stream of what is called life. (10) (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/5/2015 2:37:00 PM)

    We tend to make mountains out of mole hills. Thanks my friend

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  • (11/2/2015 12:02:00 AM)

    takes a bit of time though
    thanks Kelly-10
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    Kelly Kurt (11/2/2015 12:12:00 PM)

    In the mean time, water still manages to flow

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (11/1/2015 12:42:00 PM)

    An excellent simile to learn a real life lesson from. Exquisitely presented. Thanks for sharing Kelly. X (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/1/2015 4:24:00 PM)

    Thank you, Jayatissa. Too many people let their troubles block advancement.

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/1/2015 12:40:00 PM)

    Smooth pebbles flow with this interesting poem shared in nice Senryu form. A thoughtful sharing definitely...10 (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/1/2015 4:23:00 PM)

    Thank you, Kumarmani. We have a saying here in the states; Go with the flow. : -)

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/1/2015 12:35:00 PM)

    Amusing...........Great imagery and nicely penned, Sir. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/1/2015 4:22:00 PM)

    We often let troubles block our flow instead of letting them erode away

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 1, 2015

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