Malabika Ray Choudhury


With Your Eyes - Poem by Malabika Ray Choudhury

I am enjoying everything! With your eyes!

The incessant rain on a valley, the blessing of a sun-kissed day,

the snow-capped mountain-peaks,

the glorious sandy beach, the glow

of a gorgeous morning - enjoying all!

I am enjoying the rugged mountains, the steep hills,

the formidable sand-dunes, the wild dances of waves in the oceans -

Everything, with Your eyes!

I am not sad, I am not sad at all,

This world is beautiful!

You will bring all to me,

Saved In your heart,

Like a pearl encased in a shell

Of memory, and opens up

Only for a special one, when time comes.

I am enjoying, with your eyes,

And no one else's.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life


Comments about With Your Eyes by Malabika Ray Choudhury

  • Jez Brul (11/19/2019 7:06:00 PM)

    Now I am enjoying my morning with this spell-binding masterpiece my dear friend...My heart melts in every word..in every line..in every stanza....very captivating! ! ! ! 10++++ and to my poem list (Report)Reply

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  • (8/31/2019 11:50:00 AM)

    Nice imagegry. Cheers (Report)Reply

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  • (8/8/2019 3:18:00 AM)

    Hi Malabika,
    Congratulations on being selected poet of the day.

    This wonderful poem deserves the honour. The ability to look at, see the world through someone else’s eyes is fabulous. You have tried that and, may I say, come out successfully. Loved the way you have expressed, “The world is beautiful “, with the lovely preceding lines setting the background.
    “You will bring it all to me
    Saved in your heart
    Like a pearl encased in its shell” lovely. A 100 and onto MyPoemList.
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    Malabika Ray Choudhury(8/8/2019 6:23:00 AM)

    Wow! Thank you so much! Really like the way you have analyzed the lines!

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  • (7/11/2019 7:57:00 PM)

    Great creativity. I enjoyed the imagery.

    Thank you for your comments on What Remains.
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    Malabika Ray Choudhury(7/13/2019 10:52:00 AM)

    Your poem " What Remains" is brilliant! looking forward to reading more of your thoughtful and magical poems!

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  • Prabir Gayen (7/9/2019 12:07:00 AM)

    Very beautiful poem...... congratulation///// (Report)Reply

    Malabika Ray Choudhury(7/9/2019 6:12:00 AM)

    Thank you. Really appreciate your comment!

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  • Savita Tyagi (7/8/2019 5:23:00 PM)

    Lovely poem. These must be the eyes of a very special person who cares to show you the world! Congratulations! (Report)Reply

    Malabika Ray Choudhury(7/9/2019 6:14:00 AM)

    Thank you. You are absolutely right! Really appreciate your comment!

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  • Lyn Paul (7/8/2019 5:15:00 PM)

    A truly beautiful poem that made me think to be more grateful.
    I imagined it was written for one who was blind.
    Thank you
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    Malabika Ray Choudhury(7/9/2019 6:16:00 AM)

    That's why we write poems - to make us think and make others think! In many different ways! Thank you. Really appreciate your comment!

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  • (7/8/2019 1:20:00 PM)

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  • Bri Edwards (7/8/2019 12:53:00 PM)

    unexpectedly, i have found myself at a PC today and remembered to look up your selected poem of the day (member) .

    i like it. but i wonder what " with your eyes" means and whose eyes you are referring to here. hmm?

    1- you received eye transplants and are seeing with donors eyes (unlikely) ? ? ?

    OR

    2- you are " seeing" all those things in the artwork, photography, or writing of another? ?

    bri
    :)

    philosophical at the ending? to MyPoemList
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    Malabika Ray Choudhury(7/11/2019 6:38:00 AM)

    Thanks, Bri, for caring so much to find a PC and taking time to read my poem! You sent it to your Poem List too!
    You are a poet, I will leave it to you to interpret and answer the questions in your own way! That's what poets do!

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  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (7/8/2019 12:46:00 PM)

    A lovely poem Malabika ji.
    When you see the world through the eyes of your beloved, then everything becomes more charming, more beautiful and more enjoyable.
    Hearty Congratulations dear Poetess for the POD.......10
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    Malabika Ray Choudhury(7/9/2019 6:20:00 AM)

    Thank you, Geeta! You are absolutely right - when you see the world through the eyes of someone who care about you and the beauties of the world as much as you do, everything becomes charming! Really appreciate your comment!

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  • Drtony Brahmin (7/8/2019 12:26:00 PM)

    he formidable sand-dunes, the wild dances of waves in the oceans -
    Everything, with Your eyes!
    I am not sad, I am not sad at all,
    This world is beautiful! Like a pearl encased in a shell. beautiful poem with so much of energy, hope and love. thank u dear poetess. and congrats for POD
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    Malabika Ray Choudhury(7/9/2019 8:00:00 AM)

    Thank you, dear Poet! So much appreciate your comment! It's a real pleasure to share poems in this thoughtful poet-community!

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  • (7/8/2019 10:30:00 AM)

    The greatest rewards of pure love and trust in it beautifully unfolded. Congrats on poem of the Day. (Report)Reply

    Malabika Ray Choudhury(7/9/2019 8:02:00 AM)

    Thank you so much! Really appreciate your beautiful comment!

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  • Anil Kumar Panda (7/8/2019 10:06:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem with a smooth flow.Looking all the beauty through your eyes. Enjoyed thoroughly. Thanks for sharing and congrats. (Report)Reply

    Malabika Ray Choudhury(7/9/2019 8:05:00 AM)

    Thank you for reading! Really appreciate your comment! I am fortunate to be able to share my thoughts with the poets at PH.

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  • (7/8/2019 9:52:00 AM)

    How to express natural feeling more aptly than this? Superb! Congrats. Thank you for sharing. x (Report)Reply

    (7/9/2019 8:06:00 AM)

    Wow! What a compliment! Thank You. Really appreciate your comment!

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  • (7/8/2019 9:22:00 AM)

    ou will bring all to me, Saved In your heart, Like a pearl encased in a shell. Nice. Congratulations (Report)Reply

    (7/9/2019 8:49:00 AM)

    Thank you so much! Really appreciate your inspiring comments! Glad to share with such an amazing poet-community!

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  • Aniruddha Pathak (7/8/2019 7:36:00 AM)

    Love makes you see the beauty unseen before.
    A lovely poem that deserves to be a POD.
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    Malabika Ray Choudhury(7/9/2019 8:56:00 AM)

    Thank you so much! Really appreciate your inspiring comments.

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (7/8/2019 4:47:00 AM)

    I am enjoying the rugged mountains, the steep hills,

    the formidable sand-dunes, the wild dances of waves in the oceans -

    Everything, with Your eyes! .......outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem on love and life. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of POD.
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    Malabika Ray Choudhury(7/9/2019 8:47:00 AM)

    Thank you so much! Really appreciate your inspiring comments. I feel fortunate to be a part of this brilliant poet-community at PH!

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  • Mahtab Bangalee (7/8/2019 2:06:00 AM)

    love enjoys all,
    enjoys top to bottom, head to toe
    love enjoys all in positive sense the life...../// beautiful poem penned
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    Malabika Ray Choudhury(7/9/2019 8:19:00 AM)

    Thank you so much! Really appreciate your comments! Glad to be a part of this thoughtful community!

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  • (7/8/2019 1:08:00 AM)

    Saw the rain, snow capped mountains and sandy beaches
    Through your eyes
    Enjoyed the experience
    With my own eyes!

    A picturesque poem!
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    (7/9/2019 8:23:00 AM)

    Thank you so much! There's so much to see and feel in this beautiful world! Really appreciate your comments.

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  • Jez Brul (7/8/2019 1:02:00 AM)

    Superb imagery my friend! ! ! You have vividly conveyed what how we see things through the eyes of love..Magical

    Congratulations for being chosen..A well-deserved POD that deserves more than 10ssssss
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    Malabika Ray Choudhury(7/9/2019 8:21:00 AM)

    Thank you so much, my friend! Appreciate the kind and thoughtful comments! Nothing's better than being part of this brilliant community!

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 7, 2018

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 13, 2018


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