MAHTAB BANGALEE


You Are My Poem - Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Give me some letters
I'll make words
Give me some words
I'll make sentence
Give me some sentences
I'll make poetry
Give me some poems
I'll find you there

This is all about your poetic denotations
This you are- the poetic buds,
The poetic stalks,
The poetic petals,
The poetic leaves.
And as the poetic fragrance
you spread from yard to yard,
From port to port - all throughout the cosmos.
And this you are only one poetic bough
Where I've come as your amorous bird of soul
And through the poetic love I seek impenetrable ring.

-July 02,2018 Chattogram

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আমায় কিছু অক্ষর দাও
আমি শব্দ বানাব
আমায় কিছু শব্দ দাও
আমি বাক্য বানাব
আমায় কিছু বাক্য দাও
আমি কবিতা বানাব
আমায় কিছু কবিতা দাও
সেখানে আমি তোমায়ই খুঁজব

এ তোমার কাব্যময়ীতার সবই
এ তুমি - কাব্যময়ীতার কলি,
কাব্যময়ীতার বৃন্ত,
কাব্যময়ীতার দল,
কাব্যময়ীতার পাতা,
কাব্যময়ীতার সুগন্ধি হয়ে ছড়িয়ে পড়ো প্রান্তর থেকে প্রান্তরে
বন্দর থেকে বন্দরে - নিসর্গ সর্বময়।
আর এ তুমি কাব্যময়ীতার একটি শাখা
যেখানে আমি তোমার প্রেম প্রণয় হয়ে আসা একটি প্রাণ পাখি
আর কাব্যময়ীতার প্রেমে খুঁজি অভেদ্য বলয়।

-জুলাই ০২, ২০১৮ চট্টগ্রাম।

Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship, poetic expression

Form: Free Verse


Comments about You Are My Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

  • Hans Vr (7/13/2019 4:58:00 AM)

    Superb poem, a true joy to read. (Report)Reply

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  • Malabika Ray (7/11/2019 6:12:00 PM)

    Absolutely lovely! I read your Bengali version too - so touching and lyrical! (Report)Reply

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  • Jane Campion (7/6/2019 11:50:00 PM)

    I have reread this absolute beauty.
    Thank you for your wonderful comments.
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  • Hazel Durham (6/27/2019 1:20:00 PM)

    Outstanding write of great creativity and expression of poetic beauty that lingers in awe! (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (6/26/2019 11:59:00 PM)

    I feel the poetic stalks, the poetic petals, the poetic leaves in this great poem! My great pleasure revisiting it! (Report)Reply

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  • Denis Mair (6/23/2019 7:41:00 AM)

    Poetic materials are given to us... we fondle them like children playing with household objects.. Who else could the giver be but the Beloved in the river of Being? Through these materials the cosmos turns its human face towards us. We are most alive in a loving relation.. (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (6/17/2019 7:40:00 AM)

    And this you are only one poetic bough/Where I've come as your amorous bird of soul A great poem! My pleasure reading it again and again! (Report)Reply

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  • Muzahidul Reza (6/17/2019 1:08:00 AM)

    You are my poem
    I load you with thoughts
    Everyday happen, ..... nice poem
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  • Jez Brul (6/11/2019 4:39:00 AM)

    wow...very expressive! ! !
    Thank you for sharing.10
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  • The Poet Poet (6/11/2019 12:36:00 AM)

    This is all about your poetic denotations
    This you are- the poetic buds,
    The poetic stalks,
    The poetic petals,
    The poetic leaves.
    And as the poetic fragrance
    you spread from yard to yard,
    From port to port - all throughout the cosmos.
    And this you are only one poetic bough
    Where I've come as your amorous bird of soul
    And through the poetic love I seek impenetrable ring
    (Report)Reply

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  • (6/5/2019 6:17:00 PM)

    You are the poem itself and poem is buried deep within your heart just the same as hidden buried treasure. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/5/2019 6:16:00 PM)

    Thank you for all of your wonderful comments about my most recent poems. You are a very talented younger poetic man. May God richly bless you and all of your loved ones by keeping you safe under the shelter of his wings. (Report)Reply

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  • The Poet Poet (6/4/2019 3:06:00 PM)

    MB MB MB OF BD? R U 2 B 0 C ME (Report)Reply

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  • Jane Campion (5/30/2019 1:53:00 AM)

    A fantastic poem dear poet. (Report)Reply

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  • Castellenas John (5/28/2019 7:50:00 AM)

    Amazing flow of words. The words danced to perfect and wonderful meaning. A outstanding poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak (5/22/2019 9:54:00 PM)

    Give me some letters
    I'll make words
    Give me some words
    I'll make sentence
    Give me some sentences
    I'll make poetry
    Give me some poems
    I'll find you there- - - - It is a superb poem of love and poetry.Here poetry and love blend with each other and become one.
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  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (5/22/2019 12:34:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem of love and poetry so beautifully penned,
    The poetic stalks,
    The poetic petals,
    The poetic leaves.
    And the poetic fragrance!
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  • The Poet Poet (5/22/2019 7:10:00 AM)

    74 reads I know u can't reply all will take all ur time so let em continue as this is the best one from u my third or 4th visit MB OF BD (Report)Reply

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  • (5/13/2019 7:05:00 AM)

    Quite lovely, poet.
    An excellent read!
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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (5/7/2019 4:41:00 AM)

    This beautiful poem is poetry about poetry! A superb work....my pleasure reading it again and again! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 2, 2018

Poem Edited: Monday, July 2, 2018


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