satyender saharan

Freshman - 873 Points (02/11/1999 / DELHI)

You Mean Alot - Poem by satyender saharan

Quicker like sand,
I will fall for you.
Higher than mountain,
I will stand for you.
Deeper than ocean
i will love you
will always walk along with you
as your shadow.

The day i saw you
i was on the seventh sky
and till date i am helpless to come back.
when you cry I die
when you laugh I live
and when you leave
i am just a body of sand
and the option i am left with
i need to wait.

Topic(s) of this poem: broken heart, lonely

Form: Acrostic

Comments about You Mean Alot by satyender saharan

  • Hazel Durham (7/31/2016 8:59:00 AM)

    WOW! ! Your gift for writing poetry oozes from every word, I love this superb write and I'm sorry it has taken me until now to read your great poems!
    I have added this to my favourite poems list!
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  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (7/20/2016 12:54:00 AM)

    Plot is nice, words are beautiful, craft is touching and the product is wonderful. X (Report) Reply

  • Vernando Poems (7/16/2016 1:00:00 AM)

    nice poems :)
    Keep it up.
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  • Kwai Chee Low (7/15/2016 10:08:00 AM)

    A nice theme behind the poem which can be improved on. For example the first five lines can be expressed as:
    Quicker than falling sand,
    I will fall for you.
    Higher than the highest mountain,
    I will stand for you.
    Deeper than the deepest ocean,
    I will love you true.
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    Satyender Saharan (7/15/2016 10:13:00 AM)

    thank you so much sir next time for sure i will keep this in mind

  • Jez Brul (3/30/2016 12:23:00 PM)

    I really love this poem...young and so in love! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2015 2:46:00 AM)

    How can a love emotion beautifully expressed in the poem is wonderfully shown in these lines and it is great. (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (12/11/2015 5:48:00 AM)

    An intense emotion and love is expressed here for the loved one with such a tight attachment and feel. Enjoyrd reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (12/8/2015 7:47:00 AM)

    Quicker like sand
    I will fall for you
    Higher than mountain
    I will stand for you
    Deeper than ocean
    I will love you
    Will always walk along with you
    as your shadow- - - - Very beautiful poem showing your deep love for some one who means a lot to you.
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  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (12/8/2015 5:43:00 AM)

    So effectively you have brought out the deep emotion of love and loneliness.
    Appropriate words and visual imagery makes it a very nice poem.
    Thank you Droken!
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    Satyender Saharan (12/8/2015 11:53:00 AM)

    thq you so much maam....!

  • (11/27/2015 7:39:00 AM)

    Nice and very expressive, Goodluck (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee (11/20/2015 2:04:00 AM)

    nice poem, keep up the good work (Report) Reply

  • (11/16/2015 2:57:00 AM)

    Nicely written in poetic style and likes. (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (11/13/2015 3:51:00 AM)

    A nice and poignant write.. Thanks 'droken'.. (Report) Reply

  • Bakuli Bhakali (11/12/2015 10:09:00 AM)

    good one. keep writing! ! (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/12/2015 10:00:00 AM)

    Nicely written, Droken. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • The chinmay (11/9/2015 10:42:00 PM)

    I was on the seventh sky....fine line greatly expressed... (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/9/2015 9:29:00 PM)

    It is natural pull
    that makes you lull
    for the want of union
    and make her as companion
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  • Melvina Germain (11/9/2015 11:12:00 AM)

    I love the feel of this poem, a person longing for that special person to come forward, reaching out and calling in heart and soul, whispering, prayiing, I want you, I need you, I love you. It is apparent here that the only happiness will be found when that one true love comes into the of the broken heart...Excellent imagery here as well as you as a poet was able to bring the reader into the poem and gave them a close up view of the situation...I love when a poet is able to do that..... (Report) Reply

  • Alem Hailu G/kristos (11/9/2015 4:40:00 AM)

    It is savoury! Keep up the good job (Report) Reply

  • Alem Hailu G/kristos (11/9/2015 4:33:00 AM)

    It is savoury. Keep the good job. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 9, 2015

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