M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 165,800 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Aao Batein Kar Le - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Raat ki ankho me seyahi n jamne paye
Subh ki mehti khusboo n thamne paye
Thodi der saanson ki rawani kar le
Aao batein kar le

Jo Ghubaar dil me dafan hai wo nikal hi jaye
Paon ki bediyan aaj khul hi jaye
Mauka phir ye mile ya na mile
Aao batein kar le

Kuch tum apni kehna kuch tum hamari sunna
ek nayi baat nayi soch suhani kar le
reh gayi baat jo wo purani kar le
Aao batein kar le

Rasmo riwaj ki zanjeero se pare
Aao hum tum kahin khwabon me mile
kar le dur aaj shikwe aur gile
in budhi soch me jawani bhar le
Aao batein kar le

Topic(s) of this poem: love, love and friendship

Form: Ghazal


Poet's Notes about The Poem

आओ बातें कर ले! ! !

रात की आँखों में सियाही न जमने पाये
सुबह की महती खुशबू न थमने पाये
थोड़ी देर साँसों की रवानी करले
आओ बातें कर ले!

जो ग़ुबार दिल में दफ़न है वह निकल ही जाये
पाओं की बेड़ियां आज खुल ही जाये
मौका फिर ये मिले या न मिले
आओ बातें कर ले!

कुछ तुम अपनी कहना कुछ तुम हमारी सुनना
एक नयी बात नयी सोच सुहानी कर ले
रह गयी बात जो वो पुरानी कर ले
आओ बातें कर ले मुलाक़ातें कर ले!

रस्मो रिवाज की ज़ंजीरों से परे
आओ हम तुम कहीं ख्वाबों में मिले
कर ले दूर आज शिकवे और गिले
इन बूढी सोच में जवानी भर ले
आओ बातें कर ले!

Comments about Aao Batein Kar Le by M. Asim Nehal

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/23/2015 12:07:00 AM)


    Awesome. Adjectives are not enough to admire your creativity. you just made my day.

    And many many thanks to you for writing such a (again i'm out of adjectives) comment on my poet's page... I'm overwhelmed. & sometimes I think that your comments on my poems are more beautiful than the poem itself is. It means a lot to me to get support from a great poet like you.
    Best wishes for you.
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    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/27/2015 6:57:00 AM)

    Thanks much for your appreciation on my poems.

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  • (9/22/2015 1:44:00 PM)


    Kya baat hai...Nice Ghazal followed by awesome photo..............100 (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/28/2015 2:49:00 PM)

    Thanks u so much................

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/22/2015 1:43:00 PM)


    Well expressive. Captivating. Thanks for sharing.....10 (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/27/2015 7:00:00 AM)

    Thank u so much..................

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/27/2015 6:59:00 AM)

    Thank u so much...

  • (9/22/2015 3:52:00 AM)


    Ek khoobsoorat nazm..................................10 (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/27/2015 6:58:00 AM)

    Thanks much..

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 22, 2015


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