Ode To The Heart Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Ode To The Heart

Rating: 4.9


Your journey begins on 18th or 19th day
After fertilization of eggs
You are the first organ to be formed
And function to beat and pump blood
Then your septation into separate chambers begins
Goes out in an artery comes back in a vein
This makes you unique in the body frame
You loop with other organs and realigned
You control Inflow and outflow of blood
Though, "The Boss" sits on top of you
You work fearlessly and carefree
Your selections are unique
The tenderness, the emotions that you carry
Rules over the nature and environment

You keep a perfect record of emotions
For relationships, time and history
With Love, you have an unending bond
You accommodate all what you want
There is always a tug of war between
You and the Head, you mostly win
No one will understand your true beauty
With every individual, you discharge your duty
However, your size is not more than a fist
Yet you accommodate world within it
You are the most loved one on this earth
Among all creations, you are the best
How can one claim he is heartless?
With you the life starts and without you it ends.

Sunday, September 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: heart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zehra Bukhari 15 September 2020

Excellent Poem. Explains the birth of an ordinary human and how he should live life but with the words you used there is a greater thought about this poem.10+++ ~Zehra~Young Poet

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M Asim Nehal 17 September 2020

Thanks much Zehra~ Young Poetess for your appreciation.

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Mamta S 13 May 2022

Very well said.

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Poetic Sky 19 September 2020

Excellent ode to the heart informative and touching.

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Gordon Walter 05 June 2022

I agree with ur comm.

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Rajendra 23 May 2022

Starting and ending point of human life on earth, Superbly defined.

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Jasmeet Sam 04 May 2022

One of the best poem on heart, very informative and clever writing.

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Shreya Hacks 06 April 2022

Pleasure to re read it.

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M.J. Lemon 08 February 2022

The heart leads; it is the mind/brain that follows. Fantastic verse, Asim!

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Nabakishore Dash 03 January 2022

however your size---------it ends'.No words for me yo express my joy reading your excellent poem.

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