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The Girl

Rating: 4.8

She whispers in your ear
the secrets of her soul.
The passions locked inside her heart
she puts in your control

Her voice is like dew drops
falling on snow.
Where her heart will lead you
no one will ever know.

Her eyes are like a novel
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zoe Sem 01 April 2009

Wonderful rhythm that works beautifully with the words. Great work.

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Rory Hudson 26 March 2009

Sensitive thoughts well expressed. The rhyme scheme works well.

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Jack Price 24 March 2009

I love the passion that you display in the character. This is a very good poem! I especially love the line comparing to a novel. I totally enjoyed this work.

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Sicelo Sithole 17 March 2009

This is a very well written poem, i love it...simple, and the words are used quite effectively..regards.. Sicelo

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