Seema Chowdhury


The Miraculous View - Poem by Seema Chowdhury

As I was walking on the wet and wild pavement
Beside the heavy frost ground in the fall morning
I was completely absorbed in the miraculous view
Of the splendid, gorgeous and glorious sunrise
That was magically and swiftly unveiling it's beauty
And all the secrets of gracious God's green earth
And it was touching my heart's strings tenderly
Like the inspiring words of encouragement
And it was filling my eyes with glistning tears
And covering my soul with peace and serenity....

And even in this chilly and misty fall morning
I could feel all the warmth that the sun was emitting
That was engulfing my spirit with its ebb and flow
Just like a melting candle spreading it's fragrance
I was feeling refreshed and tuned intensely with life
And once again I was getting ready to face bravely
And start another day with its twists and turns
So I prayed fervently for merciful God's support
In every step of the way as I was faithfully walking
Beside the heavy frost watching a miraculous view....

Have a blessed weekend and be grateful to Gracious God for the gift of life.

Topic(s) of this poem: prayers


Comments about The Miraculous View by Seema Chowdhury

  • Valsa George (11/30/2015 12:32:00 AM)


    A walk in the early morning is so refreshing to our body and spirit! A cool, misty morning can give us a miraculous view with the sun rays filtering down through the haze and giving a scintillating touch to the surroundings! (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/29/2015 3:46:00 AM)


    I could feel all the warmth that the sun was emitting...Very wise and interesting expression clearly motivates mind of a reader. Interesting drafting shared definitely. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (11/28/2015 3:04:00 AM)


    We are mesmerised by the poet's blissful connect with nature and its creator, the God Almighty from where she seeks all her inspiration, hope and strength. To quote a few words:
    I was feeling refreshed and tuned intensely with life.... to face bravely... its twists and turns. So I prayed fervently for merciful God's support.
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/27/2015 12:58:00 PM)


    Superb prayer with some brilliant lines....10++++
    I could feel all the warmth that the sun was emitting
    That was engulfing my spirit with its ebb and flow
    Just like a melting candle spreading it's fragrance
    I was feeling refreshed and tuned intensely with life
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  • Shakil Ahmed (11/27/2015 7:53:00 AM)


    So I prayed fervently for merciful God's support
    In every step of the way as I was faithfully walking
    Beside the heavy frost watching a miraculous view.- nice prayer, you have submitted your soul to God, thanks for sharing...
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  • Hans Vr (11/27/2015 7:46:00 AM)


    Seema, this is one of these magical moments of amazing beauty.
    It is a pleasure to read and it vividly speaks to the mind of heart.
    Excellent poetry.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 27, 2015



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