Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 103,298 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

To A Muslim Assalam To A Hindu Ram Ram - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

I want to die at the place of my birth,
No soil is better than that soil on this earth,
Colors of that soil have a rainbow in it,
Any other soil for me is misfit,
Smell of that soil inspires my soul,
Everything of that soil suits me as a whole.
But I know I can't go there,
It's almost same I live now where,
The culture of this soil is alike and same,
Whom should I name and whom I blame,
For the walls we built for the wars we fought,
Were short sightedness and narrow minded thought,
These are the questions to be answered in future,
Nobody could divide our ancient culture,
Music of Khusro and message of Nizam,
To a Muslim Assalam to a Hindu Ram Ram.

Topic(s) of this poem: patriotism


Poet's Notes about The Poem

The entire South Asia is my home, sweet home.

Comments about To A Muslim Assalam To A Hindu Ram Ram by Akhtar Jawad

  • Bri Edwards (7/25/2017 10:26:00 PM)


    and what do YOU use as a greeting? ? ?

    bri :)
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  • Bri Edwards (7/25/2017 10:25:00 PM)


    It's almost same I live now where...........are you SURE you don't mean: It's almost same where i live now ? ? ? ?
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    online i found Many Hindus greet or farewell each other by saying Ram Ram.

    AND:

    The Islamic greeting is Assalam Alaikum (May God’s peace be upon you) .

    OK, but i won't remember, or.............will i? ?

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    well, it sounds to me [the Poet's Notes helped] that you consider all of 'South Asia' your home and say the soils are similar..........or at least you say: The culture of this soil is alike and same, BUT still you wish you could return to the soil of your birthplace.

    i would like the vultures to feast on my flesh and use my bones to bird their nests! honest! !

    no burial for me if i can help it, which i probably can't. : (

    to MyPoemList and i'll use it in August's showcase for 2017.

    Thanks.

    bri :)
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  • (3/12/2017 7:34:00 PM)


    A poem by a humanist................................................................... (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (6/16/2015 10:08:00 AM)


    A lovely patriotic poem nicely and aptly presented. I like this poem very much. Many thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (3/28/2015 12:19:00 PM)


    I salute to your humane sentiments and a deep rooted nostalgic grasp in the poem. Our moistened eyes will testify in any court of the world or the after world the trauma suffered by the innocent people on this earth through the machinations of the unscrupulous people down the ages. I wish to quote you: The culture of this soil is alike and same / Whom should I name and whom I blame, .. / Music of Khusro and message of Nizam / To a Muslim Assalam to a Hindu Ram Ram. (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/8/2014 10:47:00 AM)


    A Lovely Patriotic write......Beautiful lines...I want to die at the place of my birth,
    No soil is better than that soil on this earth,
    No class, caste, religion can ever separate us as long as Humanity is present in us......

    Beautiful message of peace and love can be seen through these words....
    Music of Khusro and message of Nizam,
    To a Muslim Assalam to a Hindu Ram Ram.

    Hum Sab Ek Hain..
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  • Amitava Sur (8/3/2014 4:58:00 AM)


    Akhta Vai - we fought for our freedom being bunched together shoulder to shoulder and the freedom came.But what a stupidity next, - in the name of religion we are separated from each other! ! ! So nonsense we are, to be given into that cheap sentiment.... resulting loosing our land, property, friends, peace everything. And a very big society is suffering with the blisters of Divide And Rule Policy . (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (8/2/2014 5:04:00 AM)


    Janani Janma-bhoomi-scha Swargadapi Gariyasi. sorry did not take devnagari script. Janani janm bhoomi swarg se mahan hai iske liye likha tan hai man hai aur pran hai.A great patriotic write sir. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (8/2/2014 4:57:00 AM)


    ???? ??????????? ?????????? ??????. in my one bengali poem - je mati amaar pratham kanna sunne chhe seyi mati te mise jete chayee. I want to sublime in that soil which has heard my first cry. Great write sir. Regards. (Report) Reply

  • (8/2/2014 1:47:00 AM)


    I want to die at the place of my birth,
    No soil is better than that soil on this earth, ......our mother land is always great..at her side separation is not a barrier.....fantastic
    thought sir.....................
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  • Valsa George (8/1/2014 11:07:00 PM)


    A very secular and broad outlook on life and people! How nice if the world were peopled with men of this thinking! How much of bloodshed and atrocities could have been averted if people could step out of the rigidities of narrow regionalism and religious bigotism! I salute you Akhtar ji for the fine spirit in you! A great write in beautiful rhymes. A 10 (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (8/1/2014 10:57:00 PM)


    This beautiful message of peace and fraternity should be learned at first.When this Universe was created there's no division of caste, creed and community.But, we divide, we fight and quarrel on silly matter.To me the best lines are- - - - - Music of Khusro and message of Nizam,
    To a Muslim Assalam to a Hindu Ram Ram.
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  • (8/1/2014 8:50:00 PM)


    You are so write Akhtar ji. Our culture, our food, our language our cloths all are so intertwined. This division caused so much pain for all. I noticed you were born in Gorakhpour. I do hope you can visit you home place some time. Living so far away from home land I share your sentiments with all my heart. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 31, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, August 1, 2014


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