Tamara Moir

Rookie (22/03/1991 / Brisbane)

A Field Of Damged Roses - A Young Girl Dies - Poem by Tamara Moir

Look at
That girl
Sitting
Alone
In the field of
Damaged Roses.
Just look
She is a
Beautiful
Disgrace.
Do you dare
To stare
At her?
She is dying...
Her life
Slipping away.
So she lays
In a field of
Damaged Roses.
Her
Beautiful Nightmare
Coming to an end.
The sun sets
A
Crimson moon rises
In it's place.
And this
Disturbed Angel
Lays...
Dying
In the field of
Damaged Roses...


Comments about A Field Of Damged Roses - A Young Girl Dies by Tamara Moir

  • (1/8/2006 12:24:00 AM)


    You weave a vivid & sad picture,
    but I perfer happier poetry.
    Liz.
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  • john tiong chunghoo (1/8/2006 12:20:00 AM)


    it is so dark and oppressive this poem. i cringed. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 8, 2006



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