Moves adrift insatiate night;
Heart drizzles yet thirst remains
Mind hugs love sweet dear to life
No stop limit time teasing finds...
Keeping romancing feels awake,
Senses ajar, the fear door shut,
Uninvited rest on the wait,
Enters no sleep; lust peeps agile…
well versed...wow.....wonder lightning in a swift strike.....rgrds/sal
Very passionate..and sensuous.. And the words lifting emotions... Marvelous..well penned...Great poem!
Nice Imagination Kesav, My favorite line 'Heart drizzles yet thirst remains' Night Agile, tele-transportating into the future. (Next Day :))
as the night sleeps there is this awakening of a man- good stuff
Subsubtle desires nicely conceptualized and brought into ‘Come Alive’ You’ve uncanny knack to delve and explore the ‘Hiddens’… Ms. Nivedita UK
There is nobody else writes like you, I am sure. This is a sweet conjugation of melody falling upon one's ears..(smile)
A lovely poem Kesav...with emotion flowing smoothly through your soft and gentle words and images....10++++++
this poem is Emotion...very nice flow and intent..thanks for sharing, Kesav. Yelena M.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very sensuous poem, good flow, well written, 10 Lynda xx