Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Gold Star - 19,205 Points (June 5th / Kerala- India)

Blue-Black Love - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

On that narrow pedestrian path,
Steeply hill side bound,
Behind an ample wayside bush
I heard a hissing sound

Peeping in, I found him loosely laid
About to lose his life
An itinerant snake charmer he,
His love for his trade was rife

Close to him I found her hiss and weep
His blue-faced, blue-lipped mate
And near to the charmer's broken pipe
I found his serpent's fate

Love possessive is blue in hue
Would transform love pink blue-black
Biting hard, it revengeful turns
No way to check its hack

11th Feb 2020

Topic(s) of this poem: revenge, story, love

Form: Light Verse

Poet's Notes about The Poem

A story poem on possessive love- A onetime epilogue

Comments about Blue-Black Love by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (2/14/2020 10:05:00 AM)

    all end
    all things under nature's care
    do fresh life spring

    did u not know
    but u glow

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (2/12/2020 2:39:00 PM)

    A poignant yet beautiful poem.
    I liked how this marvelous poem has been crafted.
    It will leave an indelible mark in the mind of a reader.
    Yes, as love has the power to give life, nurture and heal,
    it has also the power to take away life, destroy and promote
    hate and.bitterness.
    A great poem with a meaningful message.

    Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran(2/13/2020 8:17:00 AM)

    Yes. Love is a two sided knife. Trust is the sheath it needs on either side. Nice feedback on my poem Rose Marie. Liked

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (2/12/2020 9:07:00 AM)

    Yes, Indira. The revenge that comes out of possessive love is more poisonous than snake bite. How many girls are hacked, shot dead or subjected to acid abuse we daily read or hear about, in TV! Liked your insightful comment (Report)Reply

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  • Indira RenganathanIndira Renganathan (2/12/2020 8:55:00 AM)

    How agony of a love failure results in revenging and the pink love turns to be blue-black....the way you have crafted this poem is much remarkable and interesting 10 (Report)Reply

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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (2/12/2020 2:21:00 AM)

    out of the blue
    you come out anew
    love black and white equally
    that's why 100 percent love you

    How I wish were like you

    Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran(2/12/2020 5:40:00 AM)

    Thank you Poet Poet. Meaningful observation yours. Liked

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  • Kostas LagosKostas Lagos (2/11/2020 2:01:00 PM)

    I enjoyed reading your poem my friend! (Report)Reply

    Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran(2/11/2020 11:36:00 PM)

    Thank you Kostas. Glad my poem gave you enjoyment. Liked your feedback

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (2/11/2020 1:51:00 PM)

    Pink blue-black! ! ! !
    Possessive love.

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

    Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran(2/11/2020 11:38:00 PM)

    Yes. Pink to Blue black. thanks Edward

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 11, 2020

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 11, 2020

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