Marieta Maglas

Gold Star - 10,317 Points (19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

Dance Of Love - Poem by Marieta Maglas

I ride on your thighs, and I embrace you with my both hands
The wind scraps our deep love dance off with the sudden gusts.
Our swift flicks it several times, its tip just touching the wet sand.
The sky is blue and leaves of our tree are covered with orange rust.


My hands move down your body before reaching your hips.
The predation tremor is the early life dance of thrills flounder.
Cradling my body in your arms, my lips are warm against your lips.
Your thoughts make me shiver as my eyes wander endlessly over.


You take steps and make the turn into, and become a part of my dance.
An explosion of dawn light and the stirrings of happiness herald.
You take me to a loving place, take me higher, I fall into a trance.
I keep the new world in the grain of green having eyes of emerald.


You keep close, love whispers in my ear, I fly to the heavens’ high
While touching me, you dance your lips in many orbital circles.
It's a rip in the space time continuum, and I hear your love sigh.
Love makes slain the sentinel, a deity surrounding our corpuscles.


Comments about Dance Of Love by Marieta Maglas

  • Mohammad Akmal Nazir (11/16/2010 8:24:00 AM)

    Sensuousness is at its peak. The dance of love is the dance of soul. I like your unique style. Captivating write. (Report)Reply

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  • Cristobal Obregon (11/13/2010 2:16:00 PM)

    flowing power, allmost real pleasant emotion. (Report)Reply

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  • Vyktor Ekott (9/11/2010 8:05:00 AM)

    Wow! ... Did you by any chance, attend any emotional school? You make me feel like hmmmm.... hmmmmm.... Nice rhyme. Very tempting. (Report)Reply

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  • Naida Nepascua SupnetNaida Nepascua Supnet (9/9/2010 9:00:00 AM)

    haha
    passionate
    seductive
    one hot poem.
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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (7/23/2010 2:25:00 AM)

    Like floor exercise [is also a Dance] in gymnastics where Romanians have monopoly [smile] here in format of ‘You keep real close, ’...this real is REAL … thanks sharing…
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10
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  • Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (7/2/2010 11:56:00 AM)

    Sensual and passionate! Dance of love...highest form of worship! So enjoyed; D (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (5/25/2010 3:00:00 PM)

    it is full of passion and eros.................... (Report)Reply

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  • Yulissa Fregoso (4/3/2010 3:55:00 PM)

    WOW i think love is a dance and we all make mistakes in it but we get right up and we show our best moves GREAT POEM (Report)Reply

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  • Orville Phillips (4/2/2010 9:35:00 AM)

    VA VA VOOM - what more can I say... (Report)Reply

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet SimonHoward The Motivational Poet Simon (3/25/2010 6:12:00 PM)

    A deep and dearing dance that is simply delightful! (Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (3/25/2010 2:02:00 PM)

    oh what a lovely dance of love words! mind blowing allegorical expressions! compact and beautiful indeed!
    10+++
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  • Ruth Walters (3/24/2010 11:06:00 AM)

    this room has gone all steamy Marieta, haha

    Ruthie
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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/23/2010 10:19:00 PM)

    You keep real close, lover whispers to my ear, I fly to the heavens’ high
    You run your fingers through my hair, then dance your lips in orbital circle
    Yet another rip in the space time continuum, and a return of perfect fry,
    Our love makes slain the sentinel, a deity who is surrounding our crepuscle..........................................................lovely positioning of letters and its spirit and making us known the depth of real love. i was swept away by its strong urge and felt as if part of it.. lovely....10

    read mine... a dad end... a need to do
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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (3/23/2010 5:22:00 PM)

    yet most stunning, portrayal by art of love,
    eyes seems to serenade by gloss of kiss
    as when crystallized like grains of green
    hidden within vein of leaf that sways jingling
    by the the misty breeze yet ruminating........., most emotively passionate, nature may stand and stare to the very art of beauty as dappled on wings of butterfly, wonderful write by sparkling imagery and metaphors,10+++, thanks for sharing
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  • John KnightJohn Knight (3/23/2010 4:54:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful Love Poem - Mari - you have unlocked your heart for us all to enjoy thank you. V 1 There is a degree of submission here but also shared emotion due to the 'closeness' of the dance. V 2 When two lovers dance it is 'covert lovemaking' - tremor - thrill - closeness - embracing - kissing - release of inhibition - it stirs so so many memories. V 3 TWO become ONE an explosion and stirring of happiness and the subtle promise of consumation. Shining - high trance - love in the emerald eyes of you beloved - I love this stanza - so so evocative. V 4 Even closer still - heaven's high and the wonderful descripters of the God given tactility of fingers - lips - hair. 'Our love makes slain the senital - a deity who is surrounding our crepulscle' - AWESOME. In literature THE CREPULSCLE (Twilight) is 'A poetic panorama of liberated loive and love'.. This is a very choice and enigmatic word with which to end this Perfect Love Poem. Another Maglas Gem - thank you Mari. Love you in Poetry - JOHN. (Report)Reply

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  • Noel Horlanda (3/23/2010 4:02:00 AM)

    Wow there are strange words that I didn't know. Anyway this piece reminds me of the movies Shall we dance (JLO) and Dirty Dancing. When I read each line it brings me back watching these movies. Wonderful! (Report)Reply

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  • Mohammed AlbalushiMohammed Albalushi (3/23/2010 3:01:00 AM)

    interesting poem, thanks for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • Ro'ya Abdulaal (3/20/2010 5:41:00 AM)

    sweet flow, lovely images, and an amazing poet (Report)Reply

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (3/19/2010 2:22:00 PM)

    Graphic metaphoric reality with exuberance of poetic romance flowing freely and frill-ly
    10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • Eyan Desir (3/14/2010 3:51:00 PM)

    Sounds like poetic loving making good job (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 14, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 18, 2013


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