Fluid Poem by Keilani Poetry

Fluid

Rating: 5.0


all's recycled
in the press of Time

the rolling desert of yesterday
rises now in the lean gazelle

the mountain's jagged rock is found
smoothened in a mollusk's shell

and the stardust of light years
slivered and bowed

from the quiver of Apollo
piercing through folds

glistens afresh in lambent pools
moistening the crescent jewels

of your eyes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 22 December 2022

Loved the superb poetic expression; 'the rolling desert of yesterday rises now in the lean gazelle' and 'and the stardust of light years slivered and bowed' Why should not this excellent poem be read time and again?

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Keilani Poetry 22 December 2022

I am humbled by your gracious words, dear poet.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 December 2022

Thus it's a wonderful discovery that fluid is the 4th state of matter (Physicists say: matter can only exist in three states-1.Solid; 2. Liquid; 3. Gas) .....neither it sticks like a tiny solid particle, nor flows nor emit gas!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 December 2022

Excellent Write Keilani

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 December 2022

What a beautiful poem! I get enormous pleasure in reading this wonderful poem multiple times.

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Rob Lamberton 27 December 2022

Selfless Love is the tie that binds all life together. May such love ever be recycled!

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Keilani Poetry 27 December 2022

Yes truly, Rob. Thank you for your thoughtful words. I wish you a very Happy New Year!

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David Wood 22 December 2022

Superb poem, with great imagery, we are all made of stardust through eons of time and space which will continue when Earth has become dust.

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David Wood 22 December 2022

Superb poem with great imagery, we are alll

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Keilani Poetry 22 December 2022

Thanks very kindly for your beautiful words, David

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