Briana McLain

Rookie (June 4 1992 / Houston)

Waiting - Poem by Briana McLain

Today i am waiting
So Strongley Anticipating
Do you notice im fading
Into the water im wading
its up to my knees
somebody please
The freezing cold river
could make any one shiver
a spark in your eye's lets me know everyone dies
my bodys a drift
the waster has shift
carried down stream
hearing every scream

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  • (4/30/2007 11:37:00 PM)


    A fastly flowing river tempreture inmatrial drifiting while floating it is on your back.conentrate on the sun above and in between the breath of life will you love. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 10, 2006



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