All That I Want Poem by Bhagyashree Gunjikar (Naik)

All That I Want

Rating: 4.8


I dreamt to go wide...
I skipt my sorrow sides...
Nothing helped me turn the stormy tides...
It was my faith in u, a mighty one to fight...
Gone were those days when there was happiness every side...
All I want more and more am your believer for ages and ages, can I get more for more than a while...

All That I Want
Friday, September 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: narrative,sorrow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 22 June 2018

A beautiful devotional poem written with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing.

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Saubhagya Pratap Singh 12 November 2017

The first two lines seems imprinting! !

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Naik. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Bhagyashree Naik 12 November 2017

Thank you so much..sure will go through your poem too..

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Akhtar Jawad 16 September 2017

Mero man anant kahaN sukh pave-Jaise ud jahaz ka panchi pun jahaz per ave (Kabir Das) We have no alternate but to believe in God and expect always good from him. A thoughtful poem.

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Bhagyashree Naik 12 November 2017

Thank you so much for describing these lines..

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Gajanan Mishra 16 September 2017

happiness everyside, feel within.

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