Akshat Shukla

Gold Star - 5,714 Points (20/12/1991)

Cypher - Poem by Akshat Shukla

The mist blurs my sight, frozen the eyelids;
The drizzling of sloth and paranoia over
The infinite precincts of finte life—
No retreat, disquieting bells, baseless strife.

Topic(s) of this poem: melancholy

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Cypher by Akshat Shukla

  • Nosheen Irfan (2/4/2016 12:38:00 AM)

    The feeling of melancholy overwhelms the poetic souls often. A poet's biggest battle is to fight his own sad, lonely self. This feeling makes one feel like a loser and it seems there's no way out. But writing it, describing it is a way out. An ingenious piece that describes melancholy so well. (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (1/22/2016 10:10:00 PM)

    Come out of this mist that blurs your sight..... and come to the light! Let not sloth be allowed to overpower you! (no preaching!) But the sense of melancholy that lies frozen in all your poems disturbs me. Powerful compression of feelings in this terse quatrain! A 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 22, 2016

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