Eternal Dreamer

Rookie (16.06.1990)

The Dream I See In Your Eyes - Poem by Eternal Dreamer

I see a dream in your eyes;
Deep, strong, promising;
Wandering like a ghost;
Lost, blind, mute;
Searching for directions;
And it does not know;
How to find it's way;
And it does not know;
How to see it;
And it does not know;
How to hear it;
And it does not know;
How to feel it;
Standing still;
Like a statue;
With no movement;
But hands full of hope.


Comments about The Dream I See In Your Eyes by Eternal Dreamer

  • Natasha Kirke (12/5/2010 11:22:00 AM)


    Wow! This is good!
    This is a very visual description of a dream. You can really see the different perspectives eg. the appearance of the person in the dream like state and you can experience the dream in their head. Although it is not clear what the dream you get the feeling it is quite strong and hopeful.
    Very well done to you! :)
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 5, 2010



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